Young Star Award

I’m a student from Class 1， Grade 9. Our school has held an activity about “How will I get the young star award”recently.

My classmate Li Ming is one of the young stars. He is a top student of ourclass. He’s a tall boy and good at sports， especially basketball. He is always readyhelping淤others. He often takes part in different activities， especially for charity.

Last year， he organized basketball matches to raise money to于the childrenfrom poor areas. So far he has raised more than one thousand yuan but盂he’llsend the money to the children from poor areas soon.

What a kind-hearted student Li Ming is！ His deeds have been spokenhighly of by his teachers. Li Ming sets a good example for every student in ourschool. We should learn from him.

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